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Since you want comparison to the original (which I assume is what you're asking), I think you could have added a sort of rusty silver-b...

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Death note L chibi
First time I drew a PROPER chibi but if it still sucks then please don't kill me Sweating a little... 

Tools used: 48 Faber Castell watercolour pencils and a black marker

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I do not own death note, it belongs to Takeshi Obata and Tsugumi Oba. 
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Since you want comparison to the original (which I assume is what you're asking), I think you could have added a sort of rusty silver-brownish colour on the armour and helmet (if the colour makes any sense).

The cape should be a bit darker and the skin colour of the man should be a bit lighter because the current skin colour looks a bit burnt looking (as if he went through fire or something, not being rude here! >_<).

Otherwise, in my opinion, this looks way better than the original because yours is more majestic-looking as it's very bright and vibrant so keep a little of the bright red or other colours in there as well.

This is an amazing artwork as well as your other artworks so never feel discouraged over your awesome art! :) keep up the amazing work!
Gemini: Female version 2 (using markers)
I obviously re-drew it to make it look more cute and anime-ish. This is coloured using markers which is why the colouring is horrible Sweating a little... I edited it slightly to make it look cleaner and prettier.

Tools used: Maped markers, Staedtler markers, Faber Castell markers.
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Gemini: Female version 1
This is the drawing of Gemini using colours and it is slightly edited to make it look brighter and nicer.

Tools used: 48 Faber Castell watercolour pencils
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Hello, my name's Lear and I'm an awesome artist and writer as you can see (*cough* more like lame *cough*). I'm a self-taught artist and writer and although I'm bad at gaming, I really love playing games (I'm not good at shooting or fighting-related games but I'm good at strategic/thinking ones like rpgs and visual novels).

As you can tell from my drawings, I'm an otaku. Now that you all read my so-called bio, bow down at my awesomeness!!! >:D ...And also take a moment to stare at the beautiful guy in the photo above... *-*
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PayneGray Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hi! Thanks so much for the watch and the fave on my Chiaki and Bernie art! :hug:
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tulf42 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for badging back! :D
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lear709 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
No prob :)
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Naeviss Featured By Owner May 31, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
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lear709 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
No prob :D
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yuuike Featured By Owner May 20, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Ahhhh thank you so much for the watch bby:iconmuahplz: I really appreciate it <333

If you like my art feel free to check me out on YouTube ,Tumblr , or Facebook  :iconasdfghbeeplz: //shamelessly advertises LOL
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lear709 Featured By Owner May 26, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
You're most welcome! <3 I'll be sure to check you out on YouTube xD
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yuuike Featured By Owner May 27, 2016  Student Digital Artist
ahh haha thanks again for the support :iconblushplz:
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Tuntalm Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for faving my work ! :hug: Much appreciated !
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